Thursday, November 29, 2012

Now, in daylight

We are
unrelated, but
I am
now, and since then

I am/
have been
since last night

an euphemism
for the shape of your mouth
and your breath of tobacco-comfort


ike said...

The problem started with the time when Parra was born.

There was no facebook, every other idiot did not have a camera, every commoner wasn't convinced that they are poets or authors and the in general generalization of everything had not taken place.

Now Parra is too old to insist upon more conditions.

Your posts seem restrained.. as if you are not pouring yourself out.

Go back and read your old poems.

Change you may but change not the way you wrote.

ketamine said...